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Review:collette michelle says:
Awh, poor first year Lucy!

The beginning made me giggle, because I think we've all been at that point, where our noise itches and everyone wishes and hopes the itch will just go away. I loved this line too '...but she knew if her father found out shed been caught nose picking in the library shed never be allowed back to Hogwarts. Lucy really liked Hogwarts.' It's such a funny first year worry.

Of course come the end I felt bad for her, I can assume no one wants to earn the name 'nosepicker' first week into classes. I'd also like to mention that Lucy seemed very first year, which is something you don't often see executed successfully.

This was a cute little read, darling! I enjoyed it.
xx.

Author's Response: I thought that this was such a common situation that so many people get stuck in, and I was trying to look at it from an eleven year old's view point. I'm glad that I managed to make her come across as a believable first year, I was worried she'd seem too young but I was trying to remember myself at eleven! But of course, no one wants to be a nosepicker!

Thanks for the review!


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