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Review:elegantphoenix says:
Hello, it's boysof_p0tterfan509 from the forums with the review I've promised :) Thanks for entering my challenge!

Had a spare moment in my suddenly incredibly hectic life and thought I should review this real quick, since I actually read it last night! I thought that this was a very well done one-shot, and I think that you did nicely with your adaptation of the photo you were provided to work with. Though I think you might've done a little more description from the photo, I do understand the word count restriction and that you worked with what you could to finish your entry. The emotion in this was very believable, and I liked that you chose this moment in Katie's life to write about. Many Katie stories don't even touch the topic of her time being Imperiused, so I'm glad that you chose to do something different :) I could really see where Katie was pulling all of her negative, self-blaming thoughts and emotions from, even in so little words.

I didn't see any spelling or grammar mistakes, but overall, I thought that this was really great to read :) Thank you again for taking the time to write up an entry for my challenge!

Best,
Nadhira

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm so glad you liked it; this was so much fun to write. (:

Thank you, thank you!
-Jasmine


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