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Review:Gaiapet says:
Really liked this chapter! Hilarious. Bink's story was great and makes sense for the two of them. I was sort of right about my theory that they insulted each other and then snogged. If you squint and look sideways. Haha. As usual I love Lily, Wessy Pessy (bring it back!), and Albus. They may be my favorite characters in this. I trust you to take snog buddies in a good direction for the story and not make it to lust filled. I want them to have the same bond they have now, but enhanced. If it totally changes I will be angry. My only real concern is this: WHAT IF NIA FINDS OUT!?! I see DRAMA! That's right, capital letter drama.
I love this story, but I like Jane's better as a love story. In those stories I see the guys and hunks that I want and the girls as my best friends. In this story I see them more like family members and team mates. Which makes sense because that is who they are to the narrator. But I'm not pulling for Javery (hehe) in the OMG I WISH I WERE HER WHAT A HUNK THEY ARE THE BEST COUPLE EVER way that I am for Jane and Oliver. (Joliver? Olivane?) More as if I were watching my brother figure out what the heck is wrong with him and finally get with the woman who is perfect for him. Odd. I don't know. Ramble. RAMBLEROAR! Did you like the analysis of part of my mind? Haha.
Basically, great story, keep them coming! Good chapter.





Have I mentioned that I want the grotto? I think if we get some shovels we could make a tunnel underground and dig one out. Or hire the guys in your stories to do it while we watch and eat cheese cake. Haha. Cheers!

Author's Response: HAHA I really do need to bring back Wessy-Pessy. I'll write it down.

I know you know my writing style, so I'm not going to comment too much on the line about taking snog buddies in a good direction and not lust-filled, because you know that lust has to be a part of it considering both are extremely attracted to each other ;) But don't worry, I promise I know exactly what I'm doing. Even if it seems like sometimes I'm winging it (which, let's face it, sometimes I am).

Your concern is if Nia finds out? I'm wondering what the heck Meta will do if she finds out!!

I understand what you mean about Jane's as a love story. This isn't really a love story, it's about James finding out who he is and falling in love (maybe) in the process. I'm not sure we should make a nickname for Jane and Oliver. Jollie? idk. Scary.

I totally get your analysis though. That's why I love this story. Because it's so different. I didn't want to write two stories that were so...similar, you know?

Um, yes. I know Freddie needs some extra money. He can totally dig out a grotto for us! Add in some more shirtless boys...Oliver, Fred, George, Bink, James...you've got a cheese-cake factory of awesome. Thanks for the review!


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