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Review:LindaSnape says:
Ha ha, oh my goodness! I adored this. This was probably one of the most hilarious 'couple' rumor conversations I've ever read.

If I had any complaints, it would be the brevity of the piece. Considering the nature of it, though, I can totally understand the reason why it was brief.

I just would have loved to see more Roxanne/Scorpius. Their interactions seemed far too short for my liking.

I loved the voices of the gossiping girls or boys or both. That amused me immensely.

I think this line was my favorite: "Didn't we establish that they can't be a couple?" I don't know, it sounds like something I would say.

I also liked that Roxanne didn't have any information to supply the girls with, and how disappointed they were. It seems quite realistic, though, I'm pretty certain that Roxy simply didn't want any more rumors spread about them.

Either that or she didn't like the girls. :P

This seems more written for the purpose of humor, but I would also say that the characterization was a bit sparse, and I would have died for some more description.

All in all, though, it was a great piece. Quite amusing!


Linders

Author's Response: This is a more brilliant review than I dared hope for on this piece! I've never attempted fluff in my life, but it was quite fun, actually, getting out of my comfort zone :P

I thought it suited the piece more to be short and simple; I actually avoided description, which was slightly weird because I usually sit there and wonder how I can add some to the piece, so I understand where you're coming from. I'm considering playing around with this a bit more. Or maybe writing some sort of loose companion.

Thanks for the awesome review, Linders! Glad you liked it!

Sami


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