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Review:Andrew says:
Good story. I like your characters; not much different from how they were portrayed in J.K. Rowling's novels. I also like how you've included the entire family in here, at least by mention.

I do, however, have a problem with your grammar. You have a lot of run-on sentences that could be separated with commas or semi-colons. I would keep reading whether or not you did fixed that, but it does tend to bother me a bit. It would only help your writing style in the future if you attempted to fix your mistakes!

Keep them coming.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my character portrayal. I like keeping them canon but adding some quirks here and there to make them fanfiction material.

I didn't notice the run-on sentences and thank you for pointing that out. Now that I look back on it and read them with this in mind, they do kind of seem odd. I'll definitely work on it and I appreciate the feedback. Thank you!

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