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Review:Alopex says:
Haha, wow! I wasn't expecting the elopement to be quite that quick. They sure decided in a hurry. I was also quite amused by the way Molly was thinking how adult Arthur was for having his own bank account. Lol. Well, that's the age I was when I opened my checking account, so . . . haha. They ARE young! Geez.

Aw, man, Cecilia's OWL results. I wasn't expecting that. In fact, all thoughts of OWL results went completely out of my head. I can imagine what a blow it was to Reid to see those results--a fresh reminder that Cecilia really is dead. I can't imagine that Siobhan would have handled the results any better, though.

I am prepared to be somewhat amused by the next chapter, and probably touched as well. It seems that every chapter now is bringing us closer to JKR's Molly and Arthur. They are young, but they're growing up . . . I like that there has been so much character development from the days of the love potion in "Unsinkable."

Author's Response: They would have sent the NEWTs even if they'd known she was dead, I think, much like your results would still come from SATs or GREs. They send it to your family, and since she put Reid's address down... Poor guy. Yeah, Siobhan wouldn't have liked it any better than him, but she's got long experience burying her feelings and would have appeared less completely broken-down by it.

Ah bank accounts. I remember getting my first checking account (also around this age) and thinking how awesome it was. And so grown-up. Those were the days lol.

Yes, things do perk up from here - and move rather fast, as this is a short story and it's meant to be somewhat whirlwind. Definitely starting to see their adult lives emerging, I'm glad that's coming across.

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