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Review:Alopex says:
Infinity million billion? I love that number! Though I'm sure that if faced with trying to take the limit of something as it approaches that would be a bit daunting. Unless you think of it just as infinity, in which case it can still be a pain.

By the way, how did you sneak two chapters up without me noticing? I thought I was up to date, but when I started reading chapter eight, I realized I had missed something! Oops.

I actually found myself rather annoyed with Louis in this chapter. Well, I suppose it was only a matter of time until his immaturity started getting to me. I did, however, find the whole bar brawl thing rather amusing . . . why is he always getting into trouble like that?

Ohhh yeah, this is also some kind of political intrigue sort of story. I had totally forgotten about that. Um. What was the scheme again? Thomas Thomas, I remember him. Eh, well, I can go back and re-read if I get too confused. Speaking of which, I did find the ending rather confusing. Did the poster overhear what they were saying or something?

By the way, I think it's Antonin Dolohov, not Anton Dolohov.

Author's Response: Alopex! Haven't seen you for infinity million billion years! :P Seriously though, pretty much the best number ever invented. Doesn't matter if it makes sense or not, it rises above logic.

Umm I'm sneaker and stuff? Was a while back actually, just before the queue closure? Probably just got buried in the flood of updates.

Don't really blame you to be honest! He's immature, needy and narcissistic. Still a bit loveable though? Why does he get in trouble like that? Haha good question. Think he's just one of those wrong place at the wrong time guys. Natural gifts balanced out by fairly poor luck.

There is, there is. I'll get to it properly in the next chapter or so. Basically though, Louis is actually rather on the outside of things. He knows what's happening, but can't really do anything about it. More Dominique's baby.

Grr stupid ending. Wouldn't behave so I ended up just throwing that in there. Think I'll rewrite it though. Was attempting to imply that Dom had let him out, clearly didn't work v. well though :P

Thanks for the name-check, pretty poor miss really. Thanks so much for reviewing, really is lovely to see you again!

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