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Review:Alopex says:
Another chapter! Yay! :D

I got quite a kick of the description at the very top comparing Moody to some wild west sheriff. Haha. (I actually like westerns, both reading and watching them.) I still can't figure out who or what he is, exactly, other than that he always seems to turn up at interesting moments.

I am coming to be quite suspicious of Sir Cadogan. You have hinted that he just "appeared" in Egypt. Helen is being warned against him. Also, he's said the boat is larger than it appears . . . much like the magical tent Harry & Co. live in during book 7. Lastly, Helen hints that he was inside her mind. Even if she is attracted to him, which she is, and even if she does get sea-sick, and even if the heat is stifling and dizzying, I'm still suspicious about the whole scene, particularly with that comment of hers. How is she going to escape, indeed?

And when is Moody next going to appear? I'm sure we haven't seen the last of him yet. Very, very intriguing . . .

Oh, as usual, I quite enjoyed Helen as the narrator. She's a wonderful character.

Author's Response: It's been long enough, right? I'm thinking about this story a lot more recently, and I've almost got the whole thing planned out, which is impressive after five years of work. ;) It means a lot that you're enjoying the story and Helen's narration. It's strange to think now that I disliked her when I started writing this story.

You like westerns? That's not something people usually admit to, but it's great that you liked that reference to the sheriff - Helen has a very basic knowledge of Americans, and it seems like she still thinks they're stuck in the Wild West.

It's good to be suspicious about that scene, and even better that you haven't guessed anything yet. There are a few possibilities as to what he could be, and I'll try playing around with that for a little while longer, if I can. And Moody. *sigh* I'm in danger of falling in love with him, which can't be beneficial to the story in the long run. He's an intriguing character - but then again, so is Cadogan. :P

Thank you again for reading and reviewing this story! I have a chapter drafted, but I think it needs dividing into two parts, so it might be a little while longer until it's out. *hides*

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