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Review:jellylegs2066 says:
I just have to say, this is the best story i've read on fanfiction. It's brilliantly written, with great characterisation, and I honestly feel as though this is a part of the story that JK Rowling just forgot to write! Seriously, it's awesome. I've read it three times so far, and i check virtually every day for a sequel! I'm dying :(

I've always loved the story of Alice and Frank Longbottom. Alice was great in this story, i always feel as though she's not mentionned as a favourite character by many people, so I thought I'd mention her. The chapters about what happened to her and Frank literally made me cry, especially when Lily visits her in hospital. They have one of the most tragic stories in HP, and I'm so glad that you wrote them such a nice past.

Moving on to Marlene. She. Is. Awesome. The things she comes out with are brilliant, and I know she's just a great character. I love her relationship with Remus, who is my Ultimate Favourite HP Character of all time. Izzy is great as well, I like how she's not written as perfect, and that she has a hard life, and has a temper. I hope she's alive. By the way, after I read the poem, I looked it up. It has become my favourite poem. There's a copy of it on my bedroom wall, cos it's so pretty, and sad.

I like how you gave James and Lily a realistic story. So many seem to say that Lily has trust issues, and that's why she doesn't get together with James. You followed canon, and the story of how they got together was hilarious. Talk about awkward. ;)

Wow. I've never written such a long review before! I can't wait for more, and i really hope that you write the sequel soon. You're a great author, and this is definately a BRILLIANT story.

Love Jelly X

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