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Review:LindaSnape says:
I think that this is my favorite line of the whole thing: He has always loved autumn. Autumn is when the air smells crisp, like apples, and the wind is brisk against his face when he flies. It's a perfect characterization of fall.

It's definitely how I could see James looking at fall. James and Lily both seem like fall people to me, I could see them both enjoying the season of autumn.

I absolutely loved your characterization of James. I think that you're spot on with his personality, especially when his mind is telling him to give up and he won't.

I think that him not being able to fathom the word 'can't' is quite realistic for his persona.

This was so gorgeous and yet so sad because we all know what happens to James, but is also poetic and lovely and beautiful.

The flow and description were awesome, and the pacing was magnificent as well. Not to mention there were not glaringly ugly and obvious grammatical or spelling errors to make me cringe. So that made it all the more nicer.

Great job!


Linders

Author's Response: Thanks, Linders!

James is a fun guy to write. I think he's often portrayed as pretty one-dimensional, and while I enjoy the goofy-arrogant-prankster James, I also like looking at him in greater depth because I think he's a pretty great person and character. When I decided to write this chapter about James, it was a bit difficult because I already wrote a previous one-shot about him with similar scenes, set during his time in Godric's Hollow - and I didn't want to be really repetitive, so I was a bit limited in what I could write here. But I'm glad it worked out anyway.

Thanks again!

Melanie


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