*SQUEEE* You're back :D and let me say that that was an ah-mazing chappie :DDD Where do I start? ... ... ...
OK, so I thought that Edwin's reaction to the baby being his and Anna not being raped by some Death Eater (ew) was very appropriate. At first. Then, when he started avoiding her for several days, I got a little mad. But, now that he understands and has gotten a hold of himself, it's all better. :)
Severus: Very nice. very very very very very nice. I like this side of him a WHOLE lot better. ;D Even though his snarky-ness and cynical nature is one of my favorite things about him, I still like him being nice.
Everything Else: This chapter was *fabulous*. The Prophecy sounded extremely real to me, almost like it came from JKR herself! I can't wait to see how things work out!
The End: I don't think you understand how happy I am right now. Seriously. I'm so happy that I leaped out of my desk during Study Hall and danced a small "HOORAY" dance in front of everyone. And then sat down like nothing happened. But, anyway, you better update super fast, because I REALLY REALLY REALLY wanna know what happens!!!
Love this fic :)
P.S. I hit a small writer's road block in CSI, so I'm taking a small break from it. Small, I assure you. BUT, I started a new fic and it's first chappie should be up by Sunday. It'll be called Perpetual Nothing. And I'll be sure to check out your other novel too!
Author's Response: ShadowChanger!!! You are too kind to me!! Thank you so, so, so, so, so, so, so, so much for such a fabulous review and I cannot tell you how thrilled I am you liked this chapter, especially since it was a rather short one! Thank you!
Edwin's reaction...well he pissed me off as well. But I guess I sort of understand him as he has been in a painting for more than half of his life and cannot comprehend the immense circumstances that come from that sort of "freedom." I'm not going to give away too much but he's a very, very surprising character. So yeah...
Severuss...(grins)...I love, love, love, love his character a lot and I love writing a nice and more serious side of him. I love his cynical nature too...and I hope we shall see more of that un future chapters. :)
Really? You thought the prophecy sounded real? Well, thank you so much. Initially the story was not going to take "that road" but I had to as I could not see a different ending. Things will change rather dramatically from now on. JK herself?? Thank you so much...you have no idea how encouraging that sounds...thank you!
Haa...I would have loved to see your happy dance! What can I say...I am trully flattered to get such a reaction out of the ending. I'm really glad I could be of help. lol. But seriously, I know you've been waiting for a reunion between Lily and Snape for ages and I will try my very best to make it a dramatic and long chapter for you to enjoy. I will write asap!
I've hit that road block too with this story and I gave it a break for a couple of weeks then I came back to it with new ideas, so that was good. A road block can be very productive...however paradoxal that may sound. But I hope you will continue it soon, because you've got me so hooked with CSI...I just love it.
I will check out your other story once it's up. It sounds very interesting...
Thank you! Roses gorw at Malfoy Manor became a little obsession for me at the moment because I've got the whole plot planned out and stuff. If you check it out, I hope you will like it.
Thank you so much again for all your lovely reviews :)