Report a Review

This service is designed to allow HPFF users to alert the staff about inappropriate reviews.

Review:Jenna822 says:
(Prize Review #2)

Okay, your summary was really intriguing. It was mysterious, but at the same time, you know it can't happen, you know he snaps, so it was foreboding and a little saddening. But, that is meant as a compliment. It sets up a mood for the story before it even begins.

One suggestion? I noticed in the last story I read as well, you need a way to break the ANs from the story. Either bolded or a horizontal bar. It just makes the switch easier to take.

This is a nice start for a story. I mean that. I didn't expect the girl to be in the orphanage or for it to start so young. I like that though, it was different and I think you have a great idea here. Your writing style is great, but there are a few grammatical issues here and there. :D --Jenna

8/10

Author's Response: I probably wrote the summary a million different times, so I'm glad that you mentioned it, and that it actually ended up working out. I'm really glad that you mentioned that.

Obviously Tom Riddle didn't just wake up one morning and think that he was going to hate muggleborns, and I thought it was important that it started young to show how he slowly changes. Although it'll probably jump as the story goes on!

And I'll take that advice on the AN, I started doing that on other things, but I need to go back and fix it on this!


Your Name:
Reason for this Report:

Examples:
  • The review is offensive.
  • The review is spam or chit-chat (not actually a review).
  • The review was double posted.
  • The review has formatting problems.
Repeat the number: 716
Submit Report: