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Review:liza_potter says:
Hi, it's lizzacc from the forums with your requested review. :)

I really liked this. The flow was great; nothing seemed out of pace. I was a bit surprised at how quickly Scorpius needed Rose. But I guess having been bitter for so long, you'll grasp onto anything bright and happy.

The characterization was wonderful. I enjoyed mopey Scorpius. I think Rose was described perfectly in this line: "however this girl was currently firmly lodged in her rebellious phase." Very true!

It was well-written, with no grammer mistakes caught. Good job! Quite steamy but you didn't overdo it and it was just the right amount.



Author's Response: Thank you very much for coming to review! I know, one of the things that really gets me about this chapter is how fast Scorpius did change his mind, but the thing about it was, I think he was really denying to himself that he wanted Rose. He was being sulky because he loved Anna so much but really, after the way she treated him, he deserved to go out and have fun! So, I don't know, I think it was something that he just sort of realized...oh, Anna kind of sucks. And then once he finally came to terms with that, he just wanted to throw caution to the wind. Or at least that's the way that I like to look at it :)

Thank you very much once again for reviewing!

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