So, this is possibly one of the most interesting starts to a story I have ever seen. And, even though it's a little kooky and slightly immature (in a funny way), I really, really, really, really love it. Because it's out there, and it's weird, and your main characters are Hufflepuffs and we never see that. :)
Your writing is pretty good, if it's your first time I'm even more impressed. I like Quinnie and Abigail, although sometimes their--okay, Quinnie's--randomness is a little more "um, what?" than just plain funny, but I guess that's her character, and why not let her run off with it!
It's only the second chapter but I would LOVE, LOVE, LOVE! and i mean LOVE! as in lady gaga, i want your LOVE!.to read more. (sorry i got carried away) the story is hilarious, and charming at the same time, and I am super eager to see the Sirius/Abigail thing. Sirigail. Abius. you know what i mean :) and, of course, Quinnie/Lupin! (I won't even try to combine that one) (okay maybe one. Quupin? ack!)
so, keep updating, and I'll keep reading! :) and also, I would really like to see at least one of the chapters, not necessarily now but perhaps in the future at least once, to be from Quinnie's POV...to see how her crazy little brain thinks :) you don't have to. please keep up the excellent writing, i can never find many just plain good, original, non-cliche stories on here! (no offense hpff...if the moderators somehow see this...ah, shit.)
enough rambling! i love the story! i am impressed! continue! thanks! :)
Author's Response: Wow, you have to be one of my favorite reviewers. Yay for you! & yay for me for getting such an amazing fan. (: Thank you so very much for this, I am so flattered.
Haha, I love your combinations. Abius is my favorite. Quupin will deffinently be happening somewhere in the VERY soon future (;
But of course, the first chapter is all thanks to my best friend. She wrote it a very long time ago, and since she unable to complete it.. well, why don't I carry on with it! So first chapter is written by her (:
I'm writing the next chapter at the moment! And now that you've mentioned it... A chapter filled with Quinnie's odd thoughts interest me. I don't want to get your hopes up, but if I feel the need and the perfect moment, you just might get to read her thoughts. :D
I absolutely love your rambling! It made my day (: I hope you keep reading and reviewing. Thank you! ;p