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Review:moonbaby11 says:
Wow. I thought this was really beautiful, especially since it was only 500 words long. Sometimes I think that the shorter the story is, the more beutiful and touching it can be made.

I could really feek what Lily was feeling through out this whole thing. I loved hwo she kept mentioning that in death, people are free andhave no fears at all. It just gives me a wonderful image of it.

Overall, I thougt this was perfect. I love hearing stories about people watchign and thinking about their loved ones from heavan. :)

Author's Response: I really struggled to make this 500 words, I had to keep cutting things out and finding simpler ways to say things! The less words the more important each one of them are! I'm glad that you liked the feelings and the ideas, I tried to capture the fact that when people leave us they go to a better place.

Thanks for the review!

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