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Review:AlexG2490 says:
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I liked this one quite a bit. I really enjoyed what you did with the characters. Except Scorpius is completely acting on the rebound here; I wonder how he's going to feel about the wild redhead he invited into his home a month from now.

I was really surprised at how quickly Scorpius had an epiphany, but I guess he got over having a bad day and being mean to everyone. His character was portrayed really well though; I liked that you were consistant. "I'm tired. Leave me alone. Go away."

And Rose? Well, I just like Rose. She just wants to have a bit of fun. She hasn't even committed to being a wild child for the rest of time. Just like me; I go to a venue like this occasionally but that doesn't mean I want to go clubbing always.

Nicely done as always.

Author's Response: Well Thanks Alex!! I appreciate your review, even though I kind of pushed you in to it!

I'm glad you liked it. Scorpius did have an epiphany, and I know it seemed quick, but I think really it was the first time he ever had a break through in his depression after she left, and he just wanted to be reckless.

How he's going to feel about Rose a month from now, I hadn't really thought about it. It would be an interesting sequel, this is true. Hmmm. Interesting ideas rolling about in my mind now!

I'm glad you liked Rose, too. I like her :) I feel like a lot of 19 year olds are like that, especially in America. She's kinda based off of one of my friends from undergrad who just kinda went nuts once she went to college.

Thanks so much, once again! I appreciate the time you took to come and read this and review :)

Ash

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