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Review:Prongs05JP says:
I love this story. Awesomeness! I was originally attracted to it because it bares a startling resemblance to one that I used to read on here that got "hidden" called Boyfriend. But, after reading the first couple of chapters I realised that although they start off the same way, they are completely different. And mightn't I say - this is pretty awesome? Your writing style is awesome, with Lily's narrative being both creative and engaging, neither too formal/informal. I also loved your characterisation of James 8) I can just imagine him definitely wanting to be friends, but I can't help wishing that he'd flirt openly with her a bit more; but that's only so they'd get together ;)
One thing; just at the end of this chapter I notice you have "Gordon Smith from Ravenclaw" as Head Boy. Now I *know* it's cliche for James and Lily to be HB and HG and I wonder if I'm being presumptious in wondering whether or not you knew it's actually canon? Someone told me, and it's actually in the first book... I didn't know either, so I just wondered if you did...? If you knew, and just decided to overlook it THAT'S FINE. IGNORE MY FOOLISH-BOFFY-NESS DX Anyway.
Loving the story, update soon, and I'll probably go back and review the other chapters in more detail. As for this one; the act is up :( But the show must go on!
10/10
Nick xx

Author's Response: Yeah, I knew haha. I just decided WHAT THE HECK I'm going to be noncanon for once in my life and I SWEAR there's a purpose! I probably shoulve explained that in my author's not, eh? Oopsy.

The idea of this story has actually been in my head since a couple years ago.. I just never took the time to write it and then Boyfriend came out (Yeah I read it and loved it too) and I wasn't completely sure if I should post this cause I didn't wanna seem like I was taking someones idea but then I realized that I wasn't taking anyones idea cause I thought of it even before that story.. so yeah. I just kind of rambled but whatever :)

Thanks for reading and reviewing!


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