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Review:Jolly says:
So, I found this story through... the Reviews That Made Your Day thread! Okay, odd place to find a story? Maybe. But I was about to post there and then I got stuck reading earlier posts and someone had left you such a wonderful review that I felt that this had to be a great story. Plus, after reading the review (I didn't read all of it because I didn't want too much to be given away about the plot and so on) I suddenly really wanted to read a Horror story. And your summary gave me the chills. :P

Anyway, about the story. ^^ I really like Clyde, he feels very real and the way that he likes to break rules and see how far he can go and how he also can be sensitive, in love and feel unworthy. It's just great with deep characters! ;) Also, I'm wondering, is Clyde a Slytherin?

I also like Neville's characterization. Small things like him saying that it was his turn to pay when he just as well could have said that it was Clyde's, that he was concerned over Clyde and that he thanked the waitress made him feel like the Neville we know. But at the same time he's different. He's funny and more confident with himself and I find this totally believable as Neville having a friend when he was younger would definately have changed him.

One thing that I did find odd though was that Jessamine and Clyde talked over the phone. Just a bit too unmagical for my taste. Unless Jessamine is either a Muggle or a Muggleborn and Clyde is a Muggleborn?

All in all, good story so far! Looking forward to the horrory parts! (Yes, I know horrory isn't a word ^^ I just like making them up.)
-Jolly

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you found this story - any way is fine with me! =D

Clyde is actually my favorite character I've ever written, so I'm really glad you liked him too. I appreciate what you said about Neville as well. It was my intention to show that Clyde brings out a different side of him.

I understand what you mean about the lack of magic in this story, but you may see that it becomes important.

Thank you so much!


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