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Review:Meg_ says:
Well done. I love the plot. Hermione slapping Draco was great. I thought she was going to be kind for a second with her touching his chin like that. I feel like you should've made that part a little more menacing instead of like talking to a small child.

As a side note you have a lot of spelling errors. Mostly with tenses. You've also put in that 'Harry released...' instead of 'Harry realized...' There's loads of other stuff in there. I would recommend going through it again and editing. It's a great chapter but the errors in verb tense are bad.
~Meg

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