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Review:Jane_Volturi says:
Hi Cherry Bear

This is JaneTwilight from the forums. I was scrolling through your author page and this particular one shot seemed to jump out at me. It's very rare that I ever come across a mourning Cho story, but as much as she may annoy me, I can't deny the fact that Ive always had a soft spot for Cedric, and anything that reminds me even remotley of him always seems to catch my eye.

It's interesting that the book 'Wuthering Heights' inspired you to write this story; I don't think I've ever come across a story that was based around that particular type of romance before (except for 'eclipse' of course.) I did kind of make the connection towards the end of reading this one-shot (though that could be more to do with the fact that I just finished reading the novel last night.) I really like stories based around classics, you can just tell that they're going to be good.

I really enjoyed reading this. Your words flowed really well together, and your writing made the story nice to read. You handled Cho's heartbreak really well and you kept her very much in character.

I couldn't really spot any flaws, this was a great story and it's definitley going into my favourites. Feel free to request more reviews in the future if you like. You have a great writing style and I'm sure I'd enjoy reading more of your work.

10/10

Katie (JaneTwilight) x

Author's Response: Hey there Katie! First can I thank you so much for leaving me this review? You really didn't have to at all, and it was really really really sweet of you. One of these days when my life stops sucking and being busy I'm going to leave you a super long review to thank you for it. Just wait ;) But, yeah, thanks. You rock. This review definitely made my day a little brighter.

Before I wrote this, Cho annoyed me just as much as she does you but, even after I wrote this, I'm still annoyed with her. I just think that, just like every other person in the world, she has some sadness in her life story that can't just be ignored. I'm glad you'd never read something like this before, because that's part of what I strive to achieve when I write something.

It's ironic that you just finished reading Wuthering Heights and then you read this; I wrote it right after I read the book for the first time as well. So many reviews have told me that there's not enough to compare Cho with Heathcliff, so I think the acceptance of a parallelism between them must only seem realistic and apparent after just reading the book. Or, at least, that's what I'm going to tell myself haha.

I'm so glad that you liked this so much as all that. I'm totally blushing like a loon right now. Thanks so much for the review and all the wonderful compliments! :) You're really good at cheering people up, apparently.


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