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Review:justonemorefic says:
Hah, mopey Scorpius! My love of bitter people is showing again. I like that the plot's a very believable spur-of-the-moment thing, nothing terribly romantic, but rather cathartic.

I love all of Rose's dialogue. I can totally hear it. Something that stuck out at me, though, was Scorpius's dialogue at the end. Some of it sounded a bit too stiff, like the "I'm tired of being..." part. But I love all of his dialogue at the bar xD I love his all his DO NOT WANT. GO AWAY. It makes me want to pet him :3

Author's Response: I'm glad you like mopey Scorpius! haha. I'm glad you like the dialogue at the bar, that was some of my favorite parts to write in this story. I'm sorry the part with Scorpius at the end felt a little stiff, but it actually served a purpose in the story and really was the catalyst and final reason that Rose decided to give in to her feelings. But I do respect your opinion :)

Thanks so much for coming to check this out, I'll definitely take a look at yours once I get a chance!


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