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Review:LadyOrpheus says:
An intriguing idea, but I'm not really sure that I've gotten a real sense for what's going on. I'm also a little put off by Harry's out of character opening. As an orphan himself I don't think he'd ever be so cruel to another child. I suppose it may be necessary for the plot.

And what exactly is this Espiritus clan, hmmm? Mysterious...

Additionally you have a lot of unneeded capitalization through out the piece. I would suggest reading it over or typing up several drafts before you upload it to be validated.

Your Servant,
LadyOrpheus

Author's Response: I'm going to go back over it and edit the stuff as soon as i get a beta. Thanks for the review and i'll take your input into serious consideration when I edit this chapter.

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