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Review:LadyOrpheus says:
Wow. Is pretty much all I can manage to say right now. That was some intensely deep stuff and I am thoroughly impressed, not only with your writing style and skill, but with the guts that it took to write a piece like this.

It may be only related to the core Harry Potter stories adjointly, but it captured that 5th-7th book mood very well: kind of hopeless, dreary, and internally terrifying.
It borders on poetry because it's rather abstract. And yet, that's something I've always loved.

And better yet: your OC. I read in the Author's note that she was in response to a challenge, but she seems perfectly natural, like she's not conforming to anything. Well rounded and well developed I felt see fit seemlessly in the wizarding world without even any connections to main canon characters. She both hates and then loves her mother again in an instant and she is beautifully flawed.

Well imagined, developed, and executed; I applaud you and your original story.

Sincerely,
LadyOrpheus

Author's Response: Hello LadyOrpheus!
Thank you so very much for the lovely review. I was quite happy to receive your feedback. Your comments were very kind. I really do appreciate the time you took to both read and review this fic.

I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece even though it dealt mostly with OCs. I do love writing OCs myself, although I wasn't certain how this particular story would be received, considering it doesn't directly deal with any familiar canon characters.

And I'm very pleased to hear that you liked Betty. She was one of those OCs that started out as a bit unclear and then went on to grow with the story.

Again, thank you so much for this review! It was just great hearing from you. Take care and be well!

Best,
celticbard

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