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Review:hushpuppy says:
Why did James get to pick the next captain? In the books the Head of House choose the captain. Why does Rose take Palmer's side in these fights? you didn't mention any evidence linking Al to the swelling solution so how can she just give Al detention based on suspicion? Plus, humiliating Al doesn't seem like a good way to end the competition.

Does Palmer have something up her sleeve about Quiddich practice? Is she going to throw Al off the team or not accept him onto the team?

Author's Response: James got to pick captain because he was captain the year before, and I'm sorry but in my story the captain chooses who will be best to follow in their steps.

Albus mentions how Rose and Palmer are friends. I'm sorry I didn't mention any evidence linking Al to the the Lip Swelling Potion but I thought I dont have to include every little thing into the story when it's just easy to just know something, like how Al says he always pranks Bree with his best mates, and Rose and everyone else knows this because it's pretty obvious to everyone Al and Bree don't like each other.

I'm sorry if you don't like my story. But thank you for sending me your thoughts!

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