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Review:Meg_ says:
So I like this opening. The beginning and end Harry's thoughts are a little too Machiavellian for my tastes but I see how you are setting up the story. I did enjoy Hermione pushing him away and telling him that it was inappropriate because I can see that scenario happening for them while intoxicated. Anyway you have a few grammar and spelling errors that you might want to go back through and correct. Otherwise, I'm off to read the next chap.
~Meg

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I thought I was pretty tight with the spelling and grammar but I will go back and check it through again.

Aiden


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