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Review:Meg_ says:
Bah I feel like we've digressed! The spacing! Your last chap was so fulfilling and this one was short and the spacing was crappy again.

Still I love the plot.

Also you spelled Lily wrong in your chapter title, you should probably fix that one. I'm interested for more, but I feel like you are not giving your writing the presentation it deserves. Your spacing is off and you occasionally incorrectly spell something. I'd definitely recommend getting a beta. You seem to have a great concept of plot and a good story arc. Fix your chapters and make them readable so that it presents a certain level of preparedness to your viewers.
~Meg

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