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Review:Meg_ says:
Ok so I'm sooo torn! I love the plot and the storyline! I love the way that you had him tell her too. By just handing her his ring. That was great writing.

EXCEPT you have all of these spelling mistakes all over the place. And you need to put entire lines of space in between certain paragraphs. Your plot is fantastic, but your errors deter a reader away from it. Please please go back and edit. This is already shaping up to be a great story and yet you've got these inconsistencies. Honestly I give you an 8 or 9 for plot, but due to your spelling and spacing problems that rating drops to like a 7 or 8. And I can see some readers turning away because of it. ESPECIALLY based solely off of your first chapter.

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