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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
I loved the 5th paragraph. I admit I was hooked from the first sentence, and I don't really have the time to reject storys if I'm not fond of them, but when I hit the 5th paragraph I got really into this. Like... REALLY. And Teddy talking about the difference between leaving and going. That was really fantastic. Beautiful writing.

I'm a little confused as to why they'd just do that... As a Ravenclaw naturally I like to plan and organise EVERYTHING (We DID script our whole Ravenclaw potterwatch podcast y'know) so that's probably the reason for that. I do like the spontaneous feel of this though. The run away with me thing was obviously a little spontaneous but it didn't feel that way until they actually did it.

Why is running away with someone always considered romantic? Wouldn't it be creepy? Eh, sorry. Long day ^.^ I love how you've written this though. Well done :)

9/10
Lorren

Author's Response: Well I'm glad I could get you hooked(: I suppose that's a big goal for any writer!

Hehe, maybe it's the spontaneous Gryffindor in me who decided to do it. I guess I'm one of those people who can see the romance in running away and everything. Depending on the situation.

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