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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
You have a distinctive way in which you write. You use a lot of short snappy sentences, but not so much that it's overkill. I really like it, and it's very effective.

"But most of all she hated the fact that she couldn’t hate him. She just couldn’t." Wow. Oxymoron power for the win is all I have to say about that.

And you've made me want Regulus now. Are you happy? With your repetition of the whole "He was sin" thing it made me want to growl for some, strange bizarre reason that even I don't want to know.

The ending flowed a little less well than the start, I think the short sentences were starting to be used TOO much there. But I still liked it. :)

9/10
Lorren.

Author's Response: Seeing I also wrote this one and the other story you read for the Every words count challenge I had to make the sentences small otherwise I wouldn’t fit the 500 words bill and I wouldn’t have everything I wanted in it. I don’t write this way in my other work. Atleast I think.

I also want Regulus. He’s mine! Kidding we will share him both. If that’s alright with you :D Hahaha in a bizarre way I see that as a compliment.

It was something I also noticed and hoped the readers wouldn’t notice. Writing the short sentences became after awhile even annoying for me.

-xoxox-

Cleopatraa


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