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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
Firstly, you have a beautiful banner. Honestly, pink banners usually put me off but I thought this one looked particularly stunning.

I was going to say that I'd just read another story with a Marlene in it... I guess that must've been yours too, huh? Have you written a lot from that universe?

I love how you tied the beginning in with the end. And I think I did spot a mistake somewhere but I was stupid and didn't note it down. I would look through it again but I'm on a tight schedule :) haha

I love how you wrote Marlene, and how she seemed to hate this man but love him and need him at the same time. You got that across wonderfully. But you also got across how it was almost as if Travers had manipulated her to feel that way. Very powerful stuff you have going on here.

I definitely shall check out more of your stuff. I have another lined up right now, I think, ahah.

9/10
Lorren.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much RyleeAnn@tda made it and she really did a terrific job!

Well actually this is the first time I wrote about Marlene McKinnon so it isn’t mine but I do have a tendence to write about minor characters.

I’m glad you loved that. Well yeah there are actually alot of mistakes in it especially tenses seeing I’m horrible with them. The review fest I presume.

Well he is sort of like a drug to her. People who use drugs hate that they use it but they need it and they also love it. I know a bizarre explanation. Well yeah Travers is a Slytherin so he probably could or did manipulate herto feel that way. Thank you so much i hope you have enjoyed it!

-xoxox-

Cleopatraa


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