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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
The summary of this really caught my eye. And I'm glad about that.

As ridiculous as this is, I've never read a fic in which Sirius gets married/engaged. Weird, huh? I'm glad I started with yours though.

You've balanced the dialogue and narrative well, which I adore, and the characterisation of both Sirius and Mrs McKinnon is fantastic.

I don't think you need to indicate that the flashback is a flashback. People will understand that it's a flashback, because you've put it in italics. ^.^

This is hilarious: "Are you alive!?" Peter wnated to know.
But there's a typo there you might want to correct :)

That ending brought a tear to my eye. I love how he referenced back to Marlene's gravestone. Cheesy, yes, but it still has an impact.

8/10

Author's Response: YAY! :D Although, I've read tons of Sirius/OC stories where he gets married etc, how come you haven't? xD Ah well, I am honoured :D And thanks for the typo-remark - I shall fix that ^_^ As for the 'flashback' part; well, it's just something I always do. It's a bad habit, I know :D And yes, the reference to the gravestone was way too cheesy, but way to difficult to ignore :D I JUST HAD TO! xD

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