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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
Great opening sentence there. Who is she? What's in this letter? What could be wrong?

I'm guessng this woman is Dennis' mother. Wow. It must be so difficult for her having lost her first son in the battle at hogwarts, and now her other son during his work as an auror. I'm a little baffled as to why she didn't burst into tears straight away, but if she'd almost been waiting for the day to come and if she'd had it happen before I can understand why she didn't. And some people do just deal with things that way, huh?

The paragraph containing this "Dead was dead, no matter how you chose to say it." was so perfect. As is the paragraph where she talks about Dennis' death not feeling like a new wound and I like that you've written that. All loss is loss. It doesn't have to feel different just because it's a different person.

This is really beautiful. That ending was just as perfect as the start. I saw no typo's, and I'm usually really picky about those, so yay :) I teared up a little, especially when she was saying that her husband and sons were together. SO beautiful.

10/10
Lorren

Author's Response: Helllo!

Yes, I didn't necessarily want her to burst into tears right off the bat; she'd expected it to happen someday, the question was when. Naturally, I believe she does her fair share of sobbing later on.

I feel similarly to the content of both those paragraphs. I haven't lost anyone extremely close to me, but for what I have experienced, this is a bit how it's felt, only expanded to make it apply to something as tragic as what Mrs. Creevey went through.

Thanks for reviewing, Lorren! :D


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