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Review:theelderwand says:
"James, seriously, what part of 'back off' is confusing you?"

That got me laughing out loud.

The sorting hat's song was quite good. Its Devilishly hard to write a good rhyme and I thought you handled it quite well. this was my favorite part:

"That wherever my choice places you
You were placed in Hogwarts first"

Similar to the speech the hat gave during sorting at the start of the second war. It was very appropirate.

The prank was great. I liked that a lot. Now the exhange James and Lily had (and great adding Charlus as his middle name) both got me laughing and smiling. Surely she'll realize how hard he's trying and get with the program soon? Well here's hoping.

Update soon

Eldy

Author's Response: Lily, get with the program? You are epically misjudging both her stubbornness and his inability to not muck it up. I'll be lucky to have them together before they take their NEWTS!

Glad you liked the sorting hat's song. It felt necessary to write one, but I was worried it was a bit... blah. Rhyming's never been an issue (always loved poetry as a kid), but being meaningful simultaneously is tricky. So, glad it didn't ruin it for you.

If you liked the Marauder's interaction in this, feel free to check out my non-canon Marauder's fic - Memories of Tomorrow (nudge nudge, wink wink). More sarcasm to be found, because that's how I roll.

Thanks so much for the awesome encouragement. Really will try to actually update this over the bank holiday weekend.


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