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Review:pennyardelle says:
I'm running out of time for my own deadline for the review fest, and I wanted to make absolutely sure that I stopped by and reviewed something of yours--not only are you a superhero for taking on the double points day for us, you're also clawsome for offering up all those review incentives for people. And you deserve some reviewing in return!

There were some absolutely hilarious moments in this. The line I laughed the most at was, "His toe wasn't that bad. Sure, it may've had some fungus growing on it and it had been a while since he'd bothered to bite off his toenails, but it didn't have anything contagious." That is such a you thing to write. :P And there was something hilariously tragic about Ron saying, "Without his toe he'd never feel the same again."

Fred and George were hilarious in this, too. They're the consummate businessmen, what with their demands for looking for the toe. And also the consummate disaster creators, what with their "little accident" with their cauldron. In the last scene, their dialogue was hilarious, and really perfectly authentic to how they talk in the books.

I'm so glad I got a chance to come over and read this. :) Great work, and thank you again for helping the 'Claws out so much!

Author's Response: -blushes- Thank you! -irons superhere cape- I try.

I can't believe you would even think of that being a me thing to write!... But it really is, isn't it? Haha ^.^ I think this whole oneshot is so typically me. I'm just glad people find my obscure, and slightly sick, sense of humour as funny as I do :) Hah.

Yay! You like Fred and George. They were my favourite to write, by far, and I'm so happy you think I wrote them authentically.

I'm glad you came over here to read this too :D And you've hlped out the 'Claws way more than me cap'n :)

Lorren


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