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Review:AndrinaBlack says:
The beginning made me smile especially because I can so recognise that. Why do people say that women are supposed to be slower to get ready. I'm sure some are and I'm sure I am too sometimes, but when I lived with my parents it was always my dad who was the last to be ready.

There are some small spelling mistakes, like there instead of their at some place and since instead of sense. You also have flu powder instead of floo powder. I think your spell check might have been a bit over entusiastic there. :P

I liked the beginning and the end of this story best. I have to say that the middle wasn't quite my style of humour, with all the crazy accidents and everything happening to Ron in quick succession so I don't really know what to say about that. But I especially liked the interaction between Ginny and Ron. She was teasing him, but also helping him so it really felt they were very much in character there. I also really liked the sweet ending with Ron and Hermione. It's cute how he says that he went through all that for her (and I believe he would) and how she still acts like she would if nothing had happened, except of course that she asks about it. :)

Author's Response: Haha yes, the begining was really fun to write because i wanted to show how truly nervous he was and that guys cant just me "macho" all the time! Yes, my spelling is terrible! Haha i rely solely on spellcheck! Thanks for the review, it means a lot and im glad that you enjoyed it!

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