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Review:Alopex says:
So wait a sec? Did Charlie leave Kate in that room? Or was she able to leave? I'm a bit confused. If he took down her address and said he'd be in touch soon (I was assuming a day or two later), that sort of implies she's being sent off, right? Or is she supposed to sit there for a few hours while he scrounges up some information?

At any rate, it seemed like he knew a lot more than he was letting on. Unrelated, my foot. I wonder what's so suspicious about a budgetary review? Obviously, there's a lot more going on underfoot than it appears at first. I am very curious now! Why would her wand be suddenly restricted? Could it be related to the records she's been reading? Has she suddenly gotten too close to some information? Hm.

I was amused that she was told she could fill out a form and wait a few weeks. So true! And chances are, they'd lose the form, or she'd be required to supply additional information. It always seems to work that way. I had a feeling that Charlie would be the one to come interrogate her, but I also feel that may work to her advantage . . . maybe he's going to be motivated to help her? Then again, maybe it won't make a difference. Just seems like it could be advantageous for Kate.

Author's Response: Oh, no. Did I cut the end of this chapter too much? I did some major re-works a few months ago and may have deleted something important. Thanks for pointing it out. I'll make sure to clarify at the very least.

I'm glad all the odds and ends are at least helping to build up the plot. I feel stuck with this story even though there are supposed to be a lot of pushes and pulls. Maybe if I just stick with those I can get it going again.

Thank you another ten times over for all your reviews. I really appreciate them greatly.

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