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Review:Alopex says:
I had a moment of confusion when I read that the man talking to Bernard (Arty) had long, white wishers, but I assume you meant whiskers?

So, Kate's London adventure begins. I enjoyed the little exchange she overheard in the line between Arty and Bernard. Also, the fact that she had to wait in line seemed very realistic as well. You don't shirk the bureaucratic details, do you?

Her distaste for the Ministry did come through (I particularly liked the description of the entire building as a lie, due to the enchanted windows falsely indicating that you can see out) in the beginning. Then she became distracted by the grand archive room and her task.

I loved the description of the Archives! I'd love to see that room. I've come across something similar in other fanfics, but I don't think I've ever read such a detailed description. You even included little railings and everything! *sigh* I bet I could spend hours in a place like that.

Charlie Weasley has appeared on the scene, hm? Interesting. I am taking a leap and assuming that he and Kate used to be involved? At any rate, they know each other.

Author's Response: Oh boy, wishers? I'm a terrible, terrible proofreader. I'll add that to the list of very necessary changes.

Thank you for another wonderful review.


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