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Review:Jazzeh Turnip says:
I really like your descriptive. It's not over the top (like when people start describing someones shoes...) and it reminds me a lot of JKR. She only gives vague descriptions of the most prominent features of a character, like you have here.

Slughorns character is so perfect! He definitely does seem like the kind of teacher you can go to for anything and he'd just laugh it off and tell you/help you anyway. Arthur is just so much like the character we know. I think you're a genius, y'know that, right?

I felt sorry for Arthur after he'd been given the antidote. He's so sweet and adorable, bless him. I'm glad the potion made Molly begin to see that Arthur is just as awesome as Thaddeus.


Author's Response: Yeah, I don't feel the need to fill in every single bit of the characters. I skip those parts in stories where people do it, so I don't write it. :)

I had fun writing old Sluggy. He wasn't as difficult as Dumbledore to write, oddly, despite the fact we know Dumbledore so much better. I had trouble with him when I wrote "Shift", wasn't sure I'd gotten him.

Aw, a genius, really? Thank you! You are so sweet.

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