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Review:propertyoftheHBP says:
Ugh, Beauxbatons sounds like Umbridge in their Dark Magic approach...but I can easily believe it. It was so...creepy when Fleur let loose on that Death Eater, but that part especially was written so well. She really did seem like a monster, being so ruthless to him like that, even if he was a Death Eater. Then her remorse after was so sad, but it was perfect for her character.

It's also so sad to think that Remus died because he was helping someone else out like that, but it's likely how he went. And then Tonks following...I really liked Fleur's "That shouldn't matter compared to the fact that she's dead, but it does, because she should have at least been able to keep that much," line, it was heartbreaking but I loved how Fleur accepted Tonks and her outlandish appearance at least once.

This is a great story! I'm really enjoying it so far, everything great. I'll be keeping an eye out for updates! :]

Author's Response: I didn't think about that! Haha, it's not QUITE to the point that Umbridge took it, but I don't think they'd have thought it "proper" to teach young students things like Unforgivables. The scene where Fleur attacks the Death Eater was influenced by the scene in GoF when the Veelas at the World Cup throw their little temper tantrum; I'm glad you liked it!

Remus and Tonks... their deaths always make me sad when I think about it, yet it's hard to fully accept it since we didn't see it happen. I just had to write it in, for closure, I guess.

I'm working on chapter seven now (although it's being a pain :P). Thank you so much for all the wonderful reviews!


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