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Review:propertyoftheHBP says:
This was another great chapter!

I loved Dean's "I'd rather die than live in a world ruled by You-Know-Who" line. It's a great glimpse into his character that we hardly ever get to see, and it was absolutely fitting. The abruptness of his and Luna's departure was great as well--they basically up-and-left, which I think is what they would have done in that situation.

And I love how Fleur was the one to initiate hers and Bill's going to Hogwarts. From all you've written of her, it fits perfectly with her character and the dialogue between her and Bill was great, too. (But I just noticed one little thing: I don't think that any of them would have been able to Disapparate that close to the house, as it's unlikely that Disapparation would be allowed there, for safety reasons. I think it would have been better to have them go to the perimiter of the property and then leave, but of course it's just my opinion.)

Again, great chapter! I really like this story so far. :)

Author's Response: I've been doing some minor-character exploration in this fic, which is actually my favorite part of writing it. I have a soft spot for Dean, and I think just about everyone has a soft spot for Luna!

You make an excellent point about Apparating! I wasn't thinking about it at the time, but you're right. Once I finish the fic, that's something I'll have to go back and fix. Thank you very much! :)

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