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Review:In The Shadows I Dwell says:
Wow! I wondered how this would all tie in with her murder however I was not expecting this. Your writing is simply perfect and it captures her emotions so perfectly, in a way that makes you never wish to finish reading. This certainly held me captivated from the very first line, which I must admit was very hooking until the very last. Their relationship although it seemed complex was rather interesting and it was clear that despite everything there were many issues lurking beneath the surface that you just touched upon.

I really enjoyed this piece, the writing was wonderful and there were no grammatical issues to distract me which is always a bonus! I look forward to reading more of your work in the near future! :) Keep up the excellent work!

Author's Response: Wow well I think you are the only one or one of the few who actually remembered Travers killed her seeing as most people didn’t expect it. Well I’m glad it kept you hooked since the first sentence seeing I wrote it for the Hooking first sentence challenge. But seeing I also wrote this for the Every words count challenge I couldn’t show everything so yeah.

I’m glad you enjoyed it and that you didn’t find any grammatical issues and hopefully didn’t notice the tenses issue I have going on. I hope that you will enjoy any other writing from me and I also would love to know your thoughts on them!

-xoxox-

Cleopatraa


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