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Review:Capella Black says:
Wow. Remus' viewpoint on this was always bound to be emotional, but this is powerfully so. You really convey the utter sense of loss, abandonment, and horror that Remus would have been feeling, and highlight certain aspects of his grief that I hadn't even considered before, such as how he would no longer have help through his transformations.

Overall, the piece hits that middle ground between too melodramatic and too blase perfectly, and as such we really feels for Remus. The only line that I wasn't quite sure about in this regard was "A personal visit for James and Lily from Voldemort himself and a one way trip to the grave" - it's perhaps just a little too ironic and mocking, given how much Remus loved them. Of course, that's just my take on things, but it doesn't seem to quite fit with the rest of the passage, which is more outright and open despair and pain.

Still, the rest is utterly beautiful, and deeply moving, as well as being a unique and well thought out insight into this character's mind at his lowest hour.

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