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Review:Lady Kyra says:
Here with your promised review!

This was a cute little fic. I thought that at moments it was a little unrealistic, especially since they are supposed to be eleven. Do eleven-year-olds even know what a one night stand is? And I also kind of doubt that Harry, who is so lonely and just wants a friend, would look at Hermione and call her beautiful and want to kiss her. My experience with eleven-year-old boys is that they are still in the awkward stage of avoiding girls. But perhaps your Harry is just a particularly suave and debonair eleven year old.

The idea was really cute though. I liked the idea of the two of them both wanting a friend and immediately deciding to be best friends, because that is what eleven year olds do. It also had some brilliant sadness at the beginning. It really hurts to think of a little boy wishing he had died with his parents who he can't even remember. So sad!

I hope this review helps you in some way!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Your review was amazing. This is actually based off of the first chapter of the book I plan to write. In the book, the boy is actually 16, but I couldn't do that with this one because I wanted them meet before Hogwarts. I didn't want to place them in different houses because Hermione does belong in Gryffindor. I debate for quite a while at what age to put, but 11 ended up win due to the fact that I didn't want to change the houses. It's debatable what an 11 year-old knows these days. When I was 11, I didn't. Who knows now. Thanks for the review. It meant a lot. Glad you enjoyed the story.
Love,
Am. Ginny


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