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Review:SnapesBoggart says:
I was a tad confused in the beginning, but now I'm pretty sure I know what's going on. One thing I don't get is, why does Molly remember Lucy? I'd assume Percy would remember Lucy because he signed the contract-thingy... Then again, Declan remembers Lucy, so maybe it's the people who were close to Lucy that remember her?? Hmmm, well maybe that'll be answered in one of the later chapters?

I did notice that you changed to first person narrative in this paragraph-

"I didn't have much else to do in order to stall for time, as all of my things had already been packed for me and were probably already waiting in the car as usual, so I took a deep breath and headed out of my room to face probably the most unpleasant people in the universe - the Parkinsons."

Other than that, I found this chapter very intriguing and I can't wait to see what happens next! :)

Author's Response: Oh wow, I didn't notice that I switched D: I'll be sure to change that as soon as possible! Thanks for pointing that out! And yes, it's safe to say that it is only the people that were really close to Lucy who remember her. Thanks for taking the time to read and review :)

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