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Review:blueirony says:
That was just really, really sweet. I don't think I can ever tire of reading stories about Harry with his children. We all know that he would grow up to be a teddy bear, and it's just so lovely to read about it.

I was smiling as I read this. It was just so SWEET. Aw. Why must Harry be so cute with Lily? It was just such a lovely moment in their lives and it was just so cute. Aw. I can't get over how cute Harry was.

I also loved how James and Albus were also protective over Lily. As someone with an older brother, I can say with authority that it is very irritating but us younger sisters love it (even though we don't admit it!).

That bit with Joshua was so sweet. And it's lovely how that really tied the entire story together. You could have left it at at the scene with Harry and Lily but you didn't. You took it one step further and actually showed the reader that there was truth in what Harry said and I thought that was really nice, I liked how you added that scene in. I wouldn't have thought it was needed but, now that it was added in, I thought that it was very fitting.

This was so cute. I'm going to read it again once I submit this review, haha.

Joop :]

Author's Response: Thank you! Your review made me smile!!
Yes, I've always imagined Harry as that Dad that would always be there for his children and, especially since Lily is his only little girl, there should be a special connection between them.

As for James and Al, I was excited to write their part in the story because if i did have a big brother, who could annoy me every day by being protective of me and what not, I'd love it to be just like them =)

I'm happy you liked Joshua's part as well because I also enjoyed writing him. He's a sweetheart and Lily finally deserved better after what she went through with Jesse. I'm hoping to get a sequel out soon ;) There will be much more of Joshua and Lily. Maybe even those overprotective brothers we love so much will be around to scare Joshua away.. maybe not ;)

haha.. aww! a second time? thank you! I'm smiling again haha. It's nice to hear that you liked it so much because i love your stories =) made my day =D

Your review was incredibly sweet! i loved it!

-Theia..=]

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