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Review:Singularity says:
The characterization of George is really great in this story. The way that he is always cracking jokes to try to lighten the mood is very canon. I never really considered the possibility that there could be a relationship between Hermione and George, though. They didnít seem to be a good match, and I canít see any of the Weasleys betraying Ron like that. That being said, you wrote them realistically. Iím glad that you wrote them as legitimately in love, acknowledging the hold that Ron has on Hermioneís heart and the reasons why George is drawn to her. I also thought that the ending was very realistic. For better or worse, Hermione is in love with Ron, and her feelings for someone else arenít going to change that. Iím also glad that they both acknowledged that they couldnít continue their relationship.

The details of why George loved her were beautiful. You really captured Hermioneís character when writing them.

I donít really like the part where George says, ďOh, yes- did I forget to mention? She just so happens to be Hermione Granger.Ē It just seems so unnecessary. By that point, the reader knows who George is talking about. Thereís no need to announce it like that. That paragraph interrupts the flow of the story, at least for me.

Aside from that, I thought this was a really lovely story.

Singularity

Author's Response: Once again, I tend to have little awkwardly worded things throughout my stories, but they disappear in the first or second revision after being published. I'll remember that one.

thank you so much! (:


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