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Review:Rose_Weasley123 says:
RIN. SERIOUSLY.

How do you write like this, my dear? You're just so naturally talented! I mean - I think I told you how sorry I felt for Victoire, but it must be said again. She was perfectly characterised, and against how she normally is too! Normally she's the blonde, perfect one, yet here she's a misfit within her family, school and her ballet class. I just wanted to squish her all the way through.

One thing I really did adore is the way you intercut scenes from the ballet class and Victoire's flashbacs. I couldn't possibly explain why they work so well, but they just DO.

I love Teddy too, and his romance with Victoire. They seemed to have the same fears, the same arguments and the same lovely-dovey (can't think of a better word!) moments as most other couples, which makes them uber realistic.

And I actually loved the way you characterised her family - not because I liked them, because they are so in cannon, yet not, and it so works.

I adore the writing style too, as always. IDK how you do it, but I certainly will never stop reading your work.

ILY, and I LOVE THIS.

In that order, but only just :P.

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH, BECCA. I want to squish YOU. Which isn't creepy, I promise. :D

Ah, Victoire. She just sort of... wrote herself! In any case, I'm really glad you liked her. I know she's a bit different than how other people normally write her, so I was a little concerned that she wouldn't be well-received. STILL. Thank you!

Ballet! I actually know nothing about ballet, I swear. I was looking all the terms up online. :P I'm glad you liked them!

If it wasn't for Teddy, I'd feel so bad for Victoire I wouldn't have been able to write her. :D So I'm super glad that you like him too.

I LOVE YOU TOO. A LOT. And that's not creepy either, I swear.

- Rin

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