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Review:Meg_ says:
I'm giving it a 7. You've changed the movie a bit. I was kind of hoping that this story would be introduced in another light, in some other fashion. Your summary for the story does not seem to fit this opening, but whatever. It seems interesting right now. It's only like 600 words though so it's fairly short. I would post a second chapter soon because there's not much I can judge off of just this. I can tell you right now that by altering what was already in the movie that kind of sucks.

I don't mean to be harsh but I'd much rather have you tell me what's going on from Hermione's perspective inside of the Ministry but in the exact format of the movie. That makes the interpretation interesting instead of just adding what we know is your ship. But yeah that's just about the only thing I can base this off of since it's too short for anything more.

I'll read the next chap when it's posted but for now it's a 7.

Author's Response: I'm not trying to rewrite the movie though. That's not the plot of the book. I took a scene from the movie, yes, but that's it.

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