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Review:Lady Kyra says:
Wow. This was a very interesting piece that I actually read twice just to make sure I got the full weight of it. First off, I love that you used Molly Weasley II as your main character; I find that so often she is written off as just another version of Percy, so I am always glad to see her in a different characterization.

I think the really brilliant thing about this story is that no matter who you are, you can relate to it. I think we have all faced that moment where we weren't sure what love actually meant to us. I love the part about how some people use love to describe anything, because I have always had the same thought. Some people can just toss out the word love to any person and thing that they even remotely enjoy. It is great that you showed how sometimes it is used so often that the word is reduced to nothing.

Another thing I really like is the use of the Latin form of love. You are right; I have always thought Amor sounded better, and I liked that Molly thought it was better because it was not so overused. Scorpius attempting to show her love was also very good. He was like that one guy in life who you think you should love, but underneath it all you just can't.

My favorite part, however, was the first and last line. It just beautifully summarizes the piece and manages to draw readers in.

Your grammar and spelling is exceptional, and I saw no obvious errors.

I hope this review helps you in some way.

Author's Response: Hi, sorry it took a while to respond!

I was given Molly II as a character for a challenge, and I knew I wanted to make her something different from generally seen in fanfic.

I hear (and say) the word love used in so many different ways; my Molly is just the kind of girl who can't help but feel bothered by the way it's been manipulated. Maybe it's just because I'm not Latin, but to me, I don't think you can say that you "amor" chocolate, or anything like that.

Thanks for reviewing, Kyra! I'm glad you liked it :)

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