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Review:lia_2390 says:
Wow, you're descriptions were lovely. Lorcan's reaction to this was well written and really sad. I'm surprised that he could even find it within himself to form words but then again, that's what heart break does. To me he seemed just like a shell of what he could possibly have been before as his heart lay in pieces at his feet.

I like how you sort of personified his broken heart, having it out in the open for all to see, in jagged shards. Luna's role in all this really suited the situation, because when it comes down to it, your mum is always there to help.

I wonder if you used Lovegood as Lorcan's last name on purpose...

Anyway, this was a good piece, even if you think it's odd, lol.

Lia =]

Author's Response: Haha, I definitely think it's a bit odd. Especially for what I usually write. :)

Thank you so much! Lorcan Lovegood... I'd never tried writing him before, and he seemed like just the person who'd have his heart literally in pieces. Anyway, I'm glad you liked him, as he seemed to grow on me as I was writing him. He was something new and different, something that I'd never tried, so I'm definitely very pleased that you ended up liking him.

Luna... I was deathly terrified of writing Luna. I usually try to stray away from canon characters because I'm afraid I'll write them all wrong. Still, I'm really glad you liked her as well.

Thank you so much! I really, really appreciate such lovely reviews (especially from you!).


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